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Sheepish eyes of innocence
reveal mischievous wiles
as crumb covered blouse
and chocolate flecked lips
betray you.
©2005-2009 ~Evit-Morningstar
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Someone ate the last cookie!

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:iconpichu4850:
heh thats nice 8)

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:trout:

"wake up, sweetie."
"What, mommy?"
"I SAID DRESS THE FUCK UP"

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:iconwolft67:
Sloging through all the poems of tears (they were making me soggy), I findly see a gem. A cookie poem. But not just any cookie poem, a well written, image making one. I could see that person getting caught. A real gem. Very compact, powerful use of imagry, and a great last line.

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"I did what I knew. When I knew better, I did better." - Maya Angelou

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:icon67shadesofgrey:
cookies! yummers! (this is really creative... it's refreshing to read about cookies for a change, in the midst of all these angsty poems... keep it up!)

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yes, i believe in love. yes, i'm a dreamer.
but i'm not alone, there are more of us than you suspect.
and we've got bombs.
truth and beauty bombs.
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:iconevit-morningstar:
hey thanks guys! I don't check this site very often, but it's good to know that some one likes my stuff.

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